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Monday, November 17, 2008

One Bullet Left

Sometimes the sky's too cruel
     to offer up any hope
and that heavy sun of heaven
     ran dry a long time ago.
Our paths crossed me too many times
     to bother with forgiveness;
when all I've got is burden,
     your words are too much to bear.
The rain is my poetry,
     so write my elegy in the clouds.
I gave it everything I had,
     and I've only got one bullet left.

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Posted 11/17/2008 10:53 AM - 453 Views - 6 eProps - 4 comments

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"The rain is my poetry,
so write my elegy in the clouds." My absolute favorite line. Great Job.

~Angel~

Posted 11/17/2008 12:54 PM by A_Rose_Exposed - reply

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Thanks!

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amazing shit....nice!

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I like this. It is filled with angst, I love angst in poetry, thank you.

Posted 7/18/2009 5:51 AM by apoetathome - reply

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